Ok, so when I read the idea for your paper I was all like
It was super interesting! You were really able to pull me into the topic you were talking about
Your paper was formatted really well, but I was a little doubtful of if everything would make sense
But you proved everything you said really well!
Though, sometimes your sentences were a little confusing…
And you mispelled a few things (or like, one)
Despite that, though, it all made sense!
It was a great paper overall…
and honestly I wish my paper was as good as yours.