Peer feedback – Jake

First off, I really enjoyed your paper.

I thought you did well in introducing your topic and used your research well. 

But you could’ve been a little more clear. At some points you made a claim and then I looked for it in the rest of your paper and I was like “Where is it?”

Overall you did a great job and you have a great paper. So go party tonight and enjoy feeling like this.

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