Peter Scales – Gif Feedback

You got started a bit too quickly…

But I understood everything that was going on.

You kept using similar words and it felt a bit flat…

Until I got to that one fantastic paragraph

Your points were well thought out

You had great sources

But you lacked flow

You’re almost there

Good luck!

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