Peer Review- Bella

I know we are both stressing about how our essays are not exactly coming together as we had hoped

But when I was reading over your’s I was just like: Get it girl. Great argument. Great Ideas.

Just add in some more citations to strengthen your argument so that it doesn’t fall short of its potential!

keep up the good work with the rest of your paper

You can do it!

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