Sorry this is so late, so I’m just going to reiterate on here what I said over email!
But basically, I loved everything you had to say. You were very articulate and detailed in what you were saying, and it was really easy for me to understand a lot of the complex issues that were brought up.
I just think the beginning/intro was a little abrupt. I think it could ease the reader into the topic a little better, but it was very informative.
Your paper was super informative and utilized both the book and outside sources really well, but I think it could have also used a little more of your own opinion in there as well.
But overall your paper is so strong and very insightful, so I know you did really well!
And now we’re done!