Peer Review (Emily)

Sorry this is so late, so I’m just going to reiterate on here what I said over email!

But basically, I loved everything you had to say. You were very articulate and detailed in what you were saying, and it was really easy for me to understand a lot of the complex issues that were brought up.

I just think the beginning/intro was a little abrupt. I think it could ease the reader into the topic a little better, but it was very informative. 

Your paper was super informative and utilized both the book and outside sources really well, but I think it could have also used a little more of your own opinion in there as well. 

But overall your paper is so strong and very insightful, so I know you did really well!

And now we’re done!

Can’t finish this off without a little Bill Murray.


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